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Fanfic Review: Let's Play House

Type of Story: Beatles

Author: MissMaccaSunshine

Story Rating Estimation: PG

Reads: 4,516

Votes: 486

Comments: ...

Description: Meet The Beatles - they're the modern 1960's family!

Daddy John and Mama Paul live a happy life with their good friend (and mortgage payer), Brian Epstein, and their four year old son, Richie. Things in the Beatle household suddenly change due to the arrival of a new family member - but is it for the better?

Suggested If: You want a story with humor and drama

My Review: I was a little hesitant of the plot at first because I'm not the biggest mpreg fan, but it was surprisingly cute. It had a nice balance of drama, humor, and romance and I like how it focuses a lot on the kids. I like your chapter lengths and, though there was a typo here or there, your grammar and spelling was pretty damn good. Overall, this was a nice quick read!

Rating (0-5): 4

Other Notes: There is one big inconsistency I noticed with the story: George is like 4 weeks old. He should not be speaking anytime soon.