Type Of Story: YouTubers
Author: septiplierrr
Story Rating Estimation: PG-13
Reads: 1,432
Votes: 183
Comments: 105
Description: SEPTIPLIER FAN FIC
They said Jack was insane.
Mark doesn't believe it.
They said that no one could love Jack.
Mark doesn't believe it.
[TRIGGER WARNINGS! SAD ANGST, ALL THAT JAZZ]
Suggested If: you ship Markiplier and JackSepticEye
My Review: The plot goes by kinda fast, but overall it's cute and really has an 'opposites attract' factor. However, I really feel like there's not much about the story that screams "WOW!" Like, there's Sean/Jack's character, whom I really like, but there's nothing that really spices up the story, you know? Your chapter lengths could be just a tad longer, but your grammar/spelling is pretty damn good. Overall, it's actually not that bad for a first fanfic, I'd just try to spice up the plot a bit.
Note to Author: I'd continue :)
Rating (0-5): 3
Other Note: Mark and Sean are literally two of my most favorite people ever xD
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