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Fanfic Review: Sparks Fly (One Direction Fan Fiction)

Type Of Story: 1D

Author: xxWritingIsLovexx

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 33.2K

Votes: 257

Comments: ...

Description: Marissa Harrison's life is turned upside down when her father marries Johanna Tomlinson, who is the mother of Louis Tomlinson, one of 5 members in the band One Direction. Marissa has always let her heart rule over her head, but what happens when she falls head over heels for two members of the band? What happens when her past catches up to her and reminds her of what she left behind?

Suggested If: You want to read a love-triangle, completed fic

My Review: The plot is extremely cliche and honestly jumps all over the place lol, plus a lot of things (like the attempted rape) were obvious that they weren't planned and were thrown into the story just for the heck of it. Also, Marissa is kinda a slut in my opinion. Three boys like her at the start, she CONSTANTLY goes back and forth between two of those three, then she has two more annoying boyfriends (both of which, once again, were thrown in just for the heck of it) before finally ending up back with Harry. Though, even though the plot wasn't great, I liked your chapter lengths and your spelling and grammar was pretty damn good. Overall, I think that you could make a much better fic if you come up with a more original plot (and don't name the character after yourself!)

Note to Author: this fanfic screams 2012 lol

Rating (1-5): 1.5

Other Note: I stumbled upon your story through the Wattpad reading lists and decided to review it :)