Type Of Story: 5SOS
Author: speshk1234
Story Rating Estimation: PG-13
Reads: 9.3K
Votes: 713
Comments: 708
Description: Sports, boys and sweat.
Suggested If: you like hockey and things dealing with hockey
My Review: The plot is a little plain I think, but it's cute. I like the whole storyline with Paisley and Jack too. I can also relate to Paisley because I know nothing about hockey or any other sport besides horseback riding lol. Your spelling and grammar is pretty good, though it could use a little bit of work–your/you're mixups and there/their/they're mixups, mostly. Overall, it's not the best story, but I'd continue!
Note to Author: Paisley is me, I am Paisley. We are one
Rating (1-5): 3.5
Other Note: I'm sorry this took so long to get out. I've done 200 reviews, it's only natural I don't see some. Better late than never, right?
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