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Fanfic Review: Cocaine Heart

Type Of Story: 1D (I think)

Author: burnindesire

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13/R (possibly)

Reads: 201

Votes: 5

Comments: 6

Description:

Gloria Smith never had the chance to live the life of a normal 17-year-old girl. But how could she when she was born to be the daughter of the biggest drug dealer in California?

However, Gloria loved his dad more than anything. She always tried to be good enough for him.

But no matter how hard she tried to impress him, she never got the kind of love she wanted to.

Because cocaine would be always the first in his heart.

Suggested If: you like Harry AUs

My Review: So I can't exactly judge the plot too much with just one chapter but from JUST that chapter, and the description, I actually think this will turn out to be really good, if not just a tad fast. Your grammar and spelling is pretty damn good too. Overall, I think this story will hopefully turn out to be pretty good.

Note to Author: I'd definitely continue

Rating (1-5): 4

Other Note: I'm sorry this review was short, but like I said I can't judge *too* much on just one chapter lol