Type Of Story: ATL
Author: Claire_Lucie
Story Rating Estimation: PG-13
Reads: 28.4K
Votes: 303
Comments: ...
Description: Sophie and Hannah need a fresh start, to get away and leave all their shit behind. Finding new friends isn't always easy in a totally new part of the world but fortunately when the girls befriend the members of All Time Low, things seem to be on their side, but how long will it decide to stay there?
My first All Time Low fanfic that probably is terrible but I'm going to keep writing anyway! Hope you don't hate it and maybe even slightly enjoy it!
I don't own any lyrics and this story is only real in my insane mind.
Suggested If: you want to read a completed ATL fic
My Review: The plot is extremely clichè (though I'm assuming it's your first fic) and it goes by extremely fast, but it flows together pretty well. However, there are a lot of characters and sometimes I feel like it's hard to understand what's going on-also, there are some minor plot holes (such as Sophie's mom being sick) so I'd either edit those out or expand the story to fit in explanations to those holes. I like your chapter lengths and your grammar and spelling is pretty good, but there are some mistakes-mostly your/you're and there/their/they're. Overall, I'd try to edit this story some.
Note to Author: I just joined the ATL fandom and this was my first ATL fic, aha. Jack's definitely my fav!
Rating (1-5): 2
Other Note: I stumbled upon your story through the Wattpad reading lists and decided to review it :)
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