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Fanfic Review: She Looks So Perfect

Type Of Story: 5SOS

Author: pikaxiu

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 4.6K

Votes: 67

Comments: ...

Description: Zoe Sugg is the ordinary nerd who transferred from London because of a dark past and gave up on guys years ago, and is now a junior at Aldem Highschool, where she meets highschool seniors Luke Hemmings, Ashton Irwin, Calum Hood, and Michael Clifford. Pretty soon she's pulled into a game that she refuses to lose. Who will fall first?

Suggested If: you want a love triangle/love square kinda fic

My Review: Well the plot is definitely clichè, but I DO like how Zoe is 'aware' of the little game that Ashton and Luke are playing. And I like how she's choosing to tease them back as well lol, but I don't like how this seems to be like a love pentagon or whatever. Your grammar and spelling is pretty good, though I'd prefer longer chapters. Overall, the story's okay, but I'd try to come up with a more original plot!

Note to Author: The title's a little deceiving lol, I thought 5SOS were the YouTubers xD

Rating (1-5): 3

Other Note: I stumbled upon your story through the Wattpad reading lists and decided to review it :)