Type Of Story: 5SOS
Author: mukequality
Story Rating Estimation: PG-13
Reads: 2,187
Votes: 224
Comments: 285
Description: In which a seventeen-year old is hired to imitate Luke's girlfriend
Copyright © 2014
@mukequality
Suggested If: you wanna read a Luke AU
My Review: I think the plot goes a bit fast, but overall I really, really like it. I especially like the twists with 'Jane Doe' and Lissa's brother. I like your chapter lengths and your grammar and spelling is pretty damn good, but there are some mistakes I noticed–one of which was you using 'u' instead of 'you' in something other than texting. Text talk in anything other than texting or social media is no bueno when writing. Overall though, this fic is really, really good and I'd continue!
Note to Author: I'd go back and edit that 'u' (I think it was in one of the earlier chapters), but overall it's really good!
Rating (0-5): 4.5
Other Note: Ben is a hOE
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