Type Of Story: 1D
Author: 1DNarryStoran_
Story Rating Estimation: PG-13
Reads: 3.9K
Votes: 187
Comments: ...
Description: Niall is protective of Daniel.
Harry is protective of Marcel.
Where two boys protect their innocent twins from each other.
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Suggested If: you want a Narry Storan lookalike fic (x
My Review: Well, I think the plot goes by a little too fast, but overall I really like the plot. Daniel and Marcel are adorable, especially Daniel in my opinion. I'm eager to find out what happened between Harry and Niall, though I hope it's not something predictable like, they dated and broke up or something. I like your chapter lengths and your spelling/grammar is pretty decent, though there are some things I'd work on-the differences between your/you're, there/they're/their, and comma placement. Overall though, with some slight editing, I think this fic could be really cute!
Note to Author: Daniel is fav xD
Rating (1-5): 3.5 (possibly 4 once slight editing is done)
Other Note: I stumbled upon your story through the Wattpad reading lists and decided to review it :)
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