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Fanfic Review: Being A Screwed Up Mess

Type Of Story: 1D

Author: Tabby72802

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 8,955

Votes: 184

Comments: ...

Description: Maggie Hendson, a regular seventeen year old girl finding her place in the world. What will happen when she realizes she's not alone? When there are people out there that care and love her? When she realizes that not everybody will completely ignore her, but give her a chance to make an impact? What will happen when she runs into the five famous boys of One Direction? Will her life turn around? Will somone finally be able to fix her broken heart and bring her back to life?

Suggested If: you want to read a love triangle fic

My Review: The plot is extremely clichè and honestly, the ending only makes it worse. I mean...really? She wakes up and it's just a dream? That's honestly, in my opinion, one of the worst ways to end a fic. I like your chapter lengths and your grammar and spelling isn't the worst, but it could definitely use some work. You mix up your/you're all the time, some of your sentences are choppy, and whenever you make a pause in writing, you only use THREE dots ("..."), NOT a whole bunch ("......"). Overall, I'd definitely edit the plot, and bits of your grammar.

Note to Author: I'd edit!

Rating (0-5): 1.5

Other Note: I stumbled upon your story through the Wattpad reading lists and decided to review it :)