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Fanfic Review: Little Miss Rebel || 1D

Type Of Story: 1D

Author: readingg-dustt

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 3.1K

Votes: 77

Comments: ...

Description: Adelaide is not your average 18 year old girl, involved in drugs and crime. But when a mission gies wrong she must flee america and head to england. When she bumbs into five british boys here life changes forever. Drama. Tears. Lies. And romance. Everything changes for Adelaide, and when a old face shows up everything changes.

Suggested If: you like fics where the boys are famous

My Review: The plot is extremely clichè, though the fact that Adelaide is a criminal makes it more interesting than if she were an ordinary fan. However, the plot goes quickly and is kind of choppy. Also, I like your chapter lengths, but your spelling and grammar needs a LOT of work. There are several spelling errors and your grammar needs work–separating dialogue, sentence fluency, etc. Overall, it definitely needs work.

Note to Author: E d i t

Rating (1-5): 1

Other Note: I stumbled upon your story through the Wattpad reading lists and decided to review it :)