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Fanfic Review: Skins

Type Of Story: Cameron Dallas

Author: bel_ray

Story Rating Estimation: PG-13

Reads: 626

Votes: 21

Comments: ...

Description: Maria - a poor underclass men- walks the streets of Bridgewood drive everyday back to her house after lengthy hours of working endlessly at her job. Will a wounded man showing up at her doorsteps bring a whirlwind of disasters or nerve racking love battles ?

Suggested If: you like Cameron Dallas fics

My Review: Well there are only a few chapters, but so far I like where the plot is headed. I'm wondering about what kind of society Maria and her family lives in and omg I need answers. Your chapters are kind of short, but they're okay. Same with your grammar and spelling–it's decent, but needs some work. You need to work on there/their/they're, when and when not to use an apostrophe s, and spacing your punctuation. Also, defiantly and definitely not the same thing. Overall though, with some editing, I think this story could be decent!

Note to Author: I'd also edit/change the summary

Rating (1-5): 3

Other Note: I'm sorry this took so long to get out. I've done 200 reviews, it's only natural I don't see some. Better late than never, right?