Title: Bright Lights and Bumblebee
Writer: Brightbriar
Fandom: RWBY
Contest: High School AU/College AU
I meant to review this one sooner. Said story is one of the few stories I read for this contest when the contest was actually going on. I'd had a lot on my plate at the time. The story did a good job of capturing college life. However, the story did one thing which I do suggest not doing – connecting the contest entry to another piece you've written. The contest entries need to stand on their own, with nothing bolstering them up. This can however be difficult, particularly if you've got something stuck in your head. The story is still a good story.
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Fanfic Friday Review Collection
RandomThis collection includes reviews for some of the Fanfic Friday entries, but also stories submitted for the contests and prompts hosted by the Fanfic Friday profile. Here are the goals of the review collection. 1. Encourage writers not to delete thei...
