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A short 3 some sex story Must read

Percy is flunking and living his best life. Annabeth is acing everything except for the annoying 'working with other people' part. What happens when these two opposites...

Reyansh Raghuvanshi is a Famous Young Bachelor.....Sees Sara Mourya by chance in a Party And Got Interested in her... he who is a manipulator, Dominating and Lil bit Ps...

Patient 0820 was abandoned by her mother at an experimental science hospital to be tested on. When she discovers what they have done to patients in the past she is deter...

All i can say about this story is that...you'll have to read it to find out, at least give it a try and give feed back!! so i know what to do to make it better this sto...

a Boy finds out he has special abilities and finds himself saving the world

A princess on a mission to kill her father. A guard who will forever follow the princess. A Queen who will never be a mother.

Anybody loves to travel, But for jaycee it was way too much until she meets the person who changes her life forever.

hi! this is my first time publishing my work and this is just what i have of the storyline and i would love to hear your ideas and feedback i know its not that good but...

These are my screw it notes. When something goes down in my life I write about it. So this one is for my ex guy best friend.

A futuristic description of how the world will decay from the point of view of a person embracing the outcome of her world. Even though the oil spill that ruined her ai...

Starting highschool can be either very great or hourendous. This is a story in which you follow four soon to be friend, all with different likes and personalitys, as the...

The feelings i am feeling is in my poems, feel free to read and tell me what you think of them. They are the honest truth and i cant wait for you to read so i can tell y...

We are writing a personal narrative for ELA .This is not a real story I'm just saying it is because I need a good grade lol. Pls give me feedback so I can get a kinda g...

Just some ideas that I come up with.

This is a story I wrote as a stress reliever a while ago, I decided to pick it up again. As it goes currently, it follows from two characters perspectives. One perspecti...

Far away, in a world where only the chosen ones get the power of the stars. Esiora. Where the sea is full of mysteries and adventures. There on the planet Esiora at a sm...

In the city of Lindoria, a group of college friends' lives take an extraordinary turn when they discover they possess superhuman abilities. As they navigate the complexi...