[CLOSED] WoF OC Reviews

Dione;; SpaceWing OC

Submitted by catswithtophatss.

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------ Name: Dione.
Very pretty.

------ Age: 5 (at death)
That's very young to die.

------ Gender: Male.
Huh, Dione is a very feminine-sounding name (or maybe that's me; I read it as Diane initially). Cool!

------ Sexuality: Asexual aromatic
Nice.

------ Tribe: SpaceWings (to other tribes their real name is StarWings)
I'm not sure if you're familiar with imagination.drawings on Instagram, but they're a pretty popular user with a fan tribe of the same name. Of course, can't help if that's a coincidence. I'm not sure how I feel about that name... seems a bit on the nose.

------ Abilities: Okay, since this is a fan tribe I made up while thinking 'hey what if there is alien dragons' then this was made.
Nice concept.

They are able to slightly shift their form (like maybe make their tail two or three inches longer or change how tall they are for a day, it's really draining) are able to live without air (though it is refreshing to breathe it) able to create stars. (I just realized I forgot the commas).
This is nice, but... how do they create stars?
Stars are basically giant gaseous balls of plasma. They're huge. To put it into context, the sun is only average-sized for a star; and it has a gravitational pull huge enough to tug nine planets into orbit (Pluto. Is. A. Planet). It's also the closest star to Earth.
If these dragons have the ability to make stars, that has some pretty disastrous implications for the rest of their solar system.

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PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION;;
Let me give you a run-down on what most StarWings look like before I describe Dione.
Thank you.

StarWings are made up of gases and space dust. Their form is long and slim. They don't really have spikes or any claws but they have 'teeth' (the most dense part of their body). They can come in blue, purple, grey, red, and black.
Ah, so not so rigid in form? I like it.

They have stars on the inside of their gas body. The stars are there to protect their organs (digestive system, brain, heart, kidney, bladder, etc).
Are we talking stars as in star markings, or stars as in real physical stars?

So basically dragons made up of gas and space dust with a layer of stars on the inside of the gases to act like underscales to protect the organs. Also most of the time their eyes are a lighter shade of their gas color is.
Alright, fits the scheme very well. They sound beautiful!

Dione is a small (like most drangonets) and slim. His gas color is a light purple with his eyes being a lighter shade.
Purple eyes aren't that practical for seeing, but... they are in space. I suppose anything is possible.

He wears a small opal earring (he finds it very special because his mother says it from Earth).
Earth as in Pyrrhia's planet? I'm not sure our planet is the same (given that they have some very wacky biomes, huge fauna and three moons, plus a comet).

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PERSONALITY;;
------ Positive traits: Dione is a very smart boy for his age, his mother is a scholar so she wanted him to follow in her footsteps because of the good money it made (she won't force him to become one but she'll just give him the brains to become one was her thinking).
Oh?

So he started reading... a lot. If he isn't in class he would most likely be reading. Dione is very friendly, he thinks that's there's no use in being rude to others you don't know, he's willing to say hi and talk to dragons he barely knows and he likes sharing his scrolls with his friends.
Such a sweet little boy.