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*The Thief King*

By: @kaylaWex

Title: Interesting title. It makes me wonder what exactly Koltin has stolen to be considered the 'Thief King'. 

Summary: The summary sounds good. It's definiely something I haven't read. You definitely make me want to know what will happen with Kole...and see if he will succeed in defeating the Thief Lord. Also, it makes me wonder if Sera will find another love interest other than Kole. (P.S. I saw a few grammar errors on the second paragraph of the summary.) 

Storyline: The storyline seems good. You did a good job in the first chapter. You started off with Kole and Chase breaking into Shogan's place and going step by step into how they were doing trying not to get caught by Shogan's men. Good job for not getting off topic!!

Detail: The detail is amazing! You definitely know how to describe what you're talking about! 

Word of Choice: You definitely use synonyms. There was times where I would have to stop reading so I could google a word I did  not understand. 

Grammar: The grammar is good. I've understood everything I've read so far. If the grammar was horrible I'd stop reading the story and let you know. So good job!

Character's Personality: I'm not gonna lie...I've only read a few chapters, but I'm loving Kole's reckless personality, he's not scared of risking his life, and I love his humor! I also enjoyed reading Chase's parts, he's that sidekick that although does not agree in doing what his leader is doing, he'll still be loyal and help him out. 

Creativity: The creativity is definitely there! I love how your character's joke so much. I feel like your story falls under 'Humor' as well. I feel like you're creative for being able to joke on your writing...and that's a toughie...I don't laugh too much on people's 'jokes' per se, but yours had me cracking up!

Length in chapter: I'm debating wether I should give you the point of not...you had some long chapters and you had some short chapters....I might just give you half a point for this. 

I add to reading list: I'm not a big fan of Fantasy stories that don't relate to vampire or warewolfs...but I would at it to my reading list. I love how you have action, romance, humor, suspense in one story. It's hard to have all of this, but your creativity definitely achieves this! 

I gave you a point for the following:

Title-1

Summary-1

Storyline-1

Detail-1

Word of Choice-1

Grammar-1

Character's Personality-1

Creativity-1

Length in Chapter- .5

Add to Reading List-1

Total = 9.5

I rate your story a 9.5!

*Keep in mind that to me your story is a 9.5, but to others it could be a 10!