Naruto OC reviews

OC 52 (Kanade Tachibana)

This OC is also by SadiaRiaz4 I hope you like it.
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Name: Kanade Tachibana

Nice name

Gender: Female

Cool

Age: 11 (Part 1), 14 (Part 2), 17 (The Last) and 30 (Boruto)

Nice, so she is the Naruto group's age.

Family: Kotone Tachibana (mother, dead), Kouichi Tachibana (father, dead), Mei Misaki (cousin, dead), Jiro Akiyama (cousin, love interest), Shu Fujimoto (cousin)

Nice, thanks for giving the role and life status of each member.

Appearance: Kanade has straight, white hair with a tint of blue in it, although it can easily be mistaken for silver. She has one ruby eyes and one forest green. She keeps the latter covered with a white eye patch. Her skin complexion is pale and refuses to gain color, like the rest of the Akiyama clan which is her mother's clan. It has been noted by some that she has a doll-like appearance and has been called pretty by many.

Nice, I don't know what's going on with the mis colored eyes but I'm sure I'll find out.

In part 1, she keeps her long hair open, even though she knows that it can cause hindrance in battle. She wears a long-sleeved, black shirt with a purple vest over it. Along with this, she wears navy blue pants with a kunai pouch a bit above her left knee and long, black ninja boots which reach her thighs. She wears her forehead protector around her neck, like Hinata. In part 1, she is the tallest of her cousins. Her body is well-maintained, not too fragile looking and not too muscular. She is a bit under developed for her age.

Nice, and the outfit is very well described in great detail. Good job.

In part 2, her hair grows a bit longer which she now ties into an elegant bun kept in place with a pair of senbons, leaving two chin-length strands down which frame her face. She wears a light purple hooded-jacket over a half-sleeved, black shirt, black pants and the same black boots. She changes the color of her forehead protector from navy blue to white which she now wears on her head like a hairband (like Sakura). Her muscles are more toned now because of training.

Ok, it's a very nice outfit and has a great resemblance to her pre shippudden look.

In The Last, Kanade has cut her hair to chin-length and has changed her eye patch from white to black. She once again wears her forehead protector around her neck and has changed the color to black to match her Jonin outfit's color scheme. She wears a full-sleeved black shirt with a black shirt with a black flak jacket, black pants and shorter black boots. While she has lost her doll-like appearance, she is still considered pretty which often leads people to underestimate her and target her.

This is a nice outfit but looks could be deceiving regardless if she's pretty or not, not to mention many people in Natuto are targets without having looks, it could be for skill, strength, specialty, or anything. So being pretty shouldn't make her a target.

(I really hope it doesn't seem Mary Sue-ish because there are pretty people in the world too.)

No one in Naruto is ugly and being pretty is about perspective. So you may think Kanada is pretty but the person next door could think she's ugly. It's all about perspective.

Personality: Kanade can be described as fun-loving and out-going. She is always looking at the bright side of things and can turn even the most boring tasks into fun activities. She can be a bit childish and non-serious at times. She loves to annoy people, although she knows her limits. This usually applies to Sasuke and, by extension, his fangirls, sometimes by pretending to be extremely clingy and having no regard for personal space and other times by chatting away with him when he just wants her to shut up. Her cousins know that she just does it for fun and while they tell her to cut it out, they secretly enjoy it a lot.