Naruto OC reviews

OC Sprint (Inori Mizuno)

This is by a anonymous viewer, I hope you like it.
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hi, I'd like to submit an OC for reviewing! :3 Just a note beforehand that the fic she's in is an AUverse where the Uchiha Massacre does not occur. Oh, and I'd like to remain anonymous! (ahaha, sorry for popping in out of nowhere, I've been reading your OC Reviews book offline so I haven't been able to vote XD)

It's just fine. I hope you really like this.

Name: Mizuno (family name) Inori (given name)

That's a cute name.

Age: - 12 (Academy Graduation) - 15 (Part 1) - 17 (Part 2)

Oh so she's a year older like neji.

Gender: Female

Nice

Family: - Mizuno Kouji (father) - Yamanaka Inoko (mother; deceased) * Inori chooses to use her father's family name because there's no one else who can continue his lineage and little her did not like the sound of that.

Oh ok, that's cool

Appearance: Inori has pale blonde hair much like Ino's and grey eyes she inherited from her father. Her skin is somewhat tanned from staying out in the sun a lot. She's quite tall for a girl and has a lithe figure later on. During her Academy years she wears her hair long and plaited.

That's cool. She has a interesting look to her that is described simple but has a complex feel.

At 15 she wears it in a high bun to keep it out of the way while fighting and at 16 she chooses to chop it all off, leaving it at chin-length.

Oh ok.

18 onwards it's always at shoulder-length, usually open but sometimes pulled into a tiny ponytail. She's fond of traditional clothing and doesn't really like heavy mission gear. She wears short kimono-esque clothes and utterly inadequate protection for a Shinobi. It comes back to bite her many more times than not. The most peculiar thing about her clothing choice is that the skin of her left arm is never visible, despite the way she tends to flaunt her skin when she grows older. It's most often concealed by bandages

Nice, it's good to see that there is something wrong with not wearing the ninja gear. It's good to see that it comes back to bite her or it wouldn't make sense.

Personality: To sum her up, I'd say, well, annoying. Pissing people off is her favourite hobby. As a child, Inori is the mischievous type who can't keep her mouth shut, and also hates responsibility. She's uncooperative during her time in the Academy and gives her teammates hell for the first year that they know her. She can be kind, though, especially when her father and her civilian friends (more on this later) are concerned, although it's usually covered up by snark.

It's good to see a OC that is different, which is her being annoying. The way she acts already tells you how she would be towards others. It's also good to see the soft side which is when people are concerned about her. Good job.

She's observant and intelligent, but really just flaunts her sarcasm and quick wit more than anything. As she grows older, she learns to be diplomatic. When earlier she only knew how to provoke, she can now placate and manipulate. She grows more accustomed to openly showing kindness and affection, and thanks to the three years she spends with her Genin team she's able to become more cooperative and adapt to her surroundings. Instead her pride and confidence grow, to the point that she grows arrogant off her successes and needs to be brought down to earth. She's also something of a flirt. Teasing and foxy, if you will. Doesn't mind using her body to her advantages.