Author: @thegirlwithfijiwater
Summary: "Sarah is a 16 years old girl that is head over heals in love with her highschool boyfriend James, who is 17. And she feels that James loves her too... That is until she catches him cheating on her. Will these two every get a chance to save what's left of their realationship?"
Reviewer's remarks: Firstly, as I've noted in a very lot of my reviews - grammar. I read the description and I already saw some grammar errors and they are major. Like seriously guys? Can't you find an editor or something?
I liked how the story is written - explaining all the facts and etc stuff. I loved it how the writer explained how they got together and etc love stuff, but I didn't liked that the writer hadn't explained WHY he cheated. Yes, he might like them both, but it didn't look realistic to me.
The drama in the story was amazing. All the events looked very naturall and I don't want to spoil anything, but the ending was pretty good.
Rating (out of five): 4
A note to the author: The story is very good. You should fix the grammar, but I enjoyed reading it a lot. The ending has literally shocked me... I wasn't expecting it. Great job!
Reviewer: Alan247
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