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In 1996, A young man with a quiet life makes a strange discovery that alters his sense of reality; nothing makes sense, as he is somehow transported into the future- all...

The story of a young girl growing up with her cold hearted mother. Follow her life as she grows up in two different worlds. Her home life and her school life.

....I'm just spamming y'all sorry- {Might be deleted because of r e a s o n s} Just want some feedback on it-

The world has been thrown into chaos, cause the world knows of the existence of vampires. That they have been living along side them for centuries without being discover...

First it was the dreams. It's how he communicated with me. Now, it's more than dreams. And it's real. If I want to get out of this alive, do I trust him? Or do I trust...

Shane Gastling must cross to the most dangerous part of his land to defeat an enemy more powerful than any, the Immortal Master. He must hurry, before the Master's army...

Well these are some random sory ideas sitting around in my head so yeah. Tell me what you think! They might even become reality with enough feedback....

Short stories for several other stories I'm writing. Give me feedback. Some spoilers may be in order.

So, I've been working on a few different stories recently to improve my writing, many of which being JJK stories! None of them have progressed much (I think the longest...

just some stuff I wrote that I need constructive criticism, feedback and tips for please give me ur opinion!!!!!

I'll write more if you guys like it!

Murder Mystery. Part 3 done! Will add more soon. First piece, please give feedback NO HATE. ~Updated 1/1/17