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Arktul (Weird name right?) by wickdtears
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Arktul (Weird name right?)by wickdtears
....I'm just spamming y'all sorry- {Might be deleted because of r e a s o n s} Just want some feedback on it-
An Alien Land by lil_cutthroat
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An Alien Landby lil_cutthroat
This is a fantasy story about a boy living in a land ruled by a tyrant. Poverty, and crime are rampant in the streets and he took to stealing for survival but gets caugh...
Deadly-Sweet by Raymon433
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Deadly-Sweetby Raymon
Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better s...
No Place Like Home by JustAnotherWriter15
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No Place Like Homeby JustAnotherWriter15
Short story. I would love to hear your feedback and constructive criticism on improving my short story. Thank you :)
Completed
Blood on the trail by PNW_chick24
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Blood on the trailby PNW_chick24
Murder Mystery. Part 3 done! Will add more soon. First piece, please give feedback NO HATE. ~Updated 1/1/17
Silence,taboo by Jhulme15
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Silence,tabooby Jhulme15
The world has been thrown into chaos, cause the world knows of the existence of vampires. That they have been living along side them for centuries without being discover...
Just Thoughts by AustynBruno
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Just Thoughtsby Austyn Bruno
I'll write more if you guys like it!
Writing For School by ArchaicMenagerie
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Writing For Schoolby Antiel Quendak
Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?
drop of fucked up by babygirlxx_
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drop of fucked upby babygirlxx_
life, thoughts. everything summed up into 917 characters. you wouldn't understand much but, let your mind soak up the words and take them to heart just a little bit.
The Bronze Curse by TheHalfBloodKing
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The Bronze Curseby TheHalfBloodKing
Shane Gastling must cross to the most dangerous part of his land to defeat an enemy more powerful than any, the Immortal Master. He must hurry, before the Master's army...
A Dream i Had Last Night by Thug_Life_GreenApple
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A Dream i Had Last Nightby Bakugo's Main🥴
Idk yet. this was based off a dream that I had last night
Klick! Or Not... by Juneyopal
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Klick! Or Not...by Juneyopal
My short story on how 6th grade mixed me up.