Feedbackplease Stories

My short story on how 6th grade mixed me up.

So, I've been working on a few different stories recently to improve my writing, many of which being JJK stories! None of them have progressed much (I think the longest one so far only has 4 chapters as of right now). I plan to keep writing them in my own time for my own entertainment, but I want to know what stories you guys would like to actually read! Also, any ideas or suggestions, either about the writing or the story itself are welcome! (Criticism is only welcome if it's constructive! No destructive criticism please!) (Just a note, all of the stories so far are OC insert, since I'm also not entirely confident in my characterization for already existing characters yet, and OCs just make it that much easier. However, feel free to suggest story ideas that don't include any OCs! It would help me practice writing those kinds of stories!)

In 1996, A young man with a quiet life makes a strange discovery that alters his sense of reality; nothing makes sense, as he is somehow transported into the future- all he knows is he would do anything to go back.

just some stuff I wrote that I need constructive criticism, feedback and tips for please give me ur opinion!!!!!

Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better so they won't be that good for now. If you write poetry and can give feedback please do. Be harsh! I really want to improve my future pieces/ideas. c: About this poem: Past traumatic event that felt like the right thing for you at the time. Being so unaware that it's bad/unhealthy for you mentally. But later protecting those memories because they are what make you who you are. What I would like you to know: I don't care how anyone sees my poems. If it means something different to you that's okay! Take it how you will :)

....I'm just spamming y'all sorry- {Might be deleted because of r e a s o n s} Just want some feedback on it-

Idk yet. this was based off a dream that I had last night

Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?

Well these are some random sory ideas sitting around in my head so yeah. Tell me what you think! They might even become reality with enough feedback....

just a series of random short stories and weird thoughts by me, the stories will mainly be fantasy and maybe a bit of horror here and there. if you do choose to read this book feedback would be awesome, positive and negative i just want to improve my writing.

This is a fantasy story about a boy living in a land ruled by a tyrant. Poverty, and crime are rampant in the streets and he took to stealing for survival but gets caught. He is sentenced not to death, but to live and work in a colony in a distant, alien land. Unknowing and without a choice he boards the ship full of hopeful families and mercenaries to the land of hope. But little do they know the life and dangers in the newfound land. (This is my first story, feedback is greatly appreciated). :)

Short stories for several other stories I'm writing. Give me feedback. Some spoilers may be in order.

Murder Mystery. Part 3 done! Will add more soon. First piece, please give feedback NO HATE. ~Updated 1/1/17

The world has been thrown into chaos, cause the world knows of the existence of vampires. That they have been living along side them for centuries without being discovered. The story focuses on a shy girl from Pennsylvania who has a very strong opinions about what she believes. In her opinion vampires should be killed and hunted down before they kill all the humans. But she has a change of heart after going through all these events.

A short story I wrote as part of a transfer application into the Tisch School of the Arts. It's something I wrote a while ago and now that it's time for submission, I'm not sure how good it is anymore. It's "no more than six pages of creative writing consisting of a complete short story". That's the prompt. Plenty to go on, right? UPDATE: I was accepted! Thank you to everyone who read and critiqued it!

I'll write more if you guys like it!

Note on this first part of my ultimate story and first piece, any of my writings are to be approached with an open mind and are made as 'food for thought', for it is you who really write the story, the story and opinion you will tell yourself about the topics I write upon in twenty years from now...

Short story. I would love to hear your feedback and constructive criticism on improving my short story. Thank you :)

Shane Gastling must cross to the most dangerous part of his land to defeat an enemy more powerful than any, the Immortal Master. He must hurry, before the Master's army wages war upon Shane's home.