. Remove filtering words (saw, heard, knew, thought, believed, realized, felt, etc.)
. Be immediate and direct (use voice to pull readers into the character's thoughts & observations -- think judgements)
. Ensure the reader's experience comes from INSIDE the character.
. Don't name emotions. Deep POV describes what the character feels or conveys emotions through direct thoughts.
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Writing tips
RandomThis book contains -Words to use instead of said, says, went, etc -Personalities -Characteristics - words to describe movement, looks, body language and more. and a whole lot of other things.
