phantomfish

If you could change one thing about my writing style, what would it be? 
          	
          	For example, do I use the same words over and over again? Do I explain too much or too little? 
          	
          	I feel like my writing sucks or doesn’t come off the way I want to 😭 literally any criticism would be great- and you don’t have to say it nicely lol , I won’t take offense either way 

LyratheFISH

@phantomfish ngl i hope u dont change a single thing about it i LOVE ur righting style bc it reflects a ton how i think and every time i read what u write it gives me brain tickles its so pleasant reading your writing
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Allanisbored

@phantomfish no same I keep getting so many different ideas but since they literally don't make any sense if put together i keep making new books just to rage and stop it 😭 I hate grammar so much like why are there so many rules 💔
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phantomfish

@Allanisbored I have too many ideas at this point, like I just keep thinking of things. I have like five chapters planned out already, I have to do so much editing 😭 all those words means even more to spell and grammar check
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phantomfish

If you could change one thing about my writing style, what would it be? 
          
          For example, do I use the same words over and over again? Do I explain too much or too little? 
          
          I feel like my writing sucks or doesn’t come off the way I want to 😭 literally any criticism would be great- and you don’t have to say it nicely lol , I won’t take offense either way 

LyratheFISH

@phantomfish ngl i hope u dont change a single thing about it i LOVE ur righting style bc it reflects a ton how i think and every time i read what u write it gives me brain tickles its so pleasant reading your writing
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Allanisbored

@phantomfish no same I keep getting so many different ideas but since they literally don't make any sense if put together i keep making new books just to rage and stop it 😭 I hate grammar so much like why are there so many rules 💔
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phantomfish

@Allanisbored I have too many ideas at this point, like I just keep thinking of things. I have like five chapters planned out already, I have to do so much editing 😭 all those words means even more to spell and grammar check
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phantomfish

Okay wait, what is the age range of my readers?? 
          
          No one under 13 should be here, respectfully scram ☄️🏌🏻
          
          13-15 🩷
          16-18 🖤
          19-20+ 💚
          
          I’m so curious to see my apparent target audience 😭 for ref, I’m almost 19ish haha 

Allanisbored

@D00MSD4Y over here counting the days down and it's still half a year away 😭
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D00MSD4Y

@Allanisbored 6 months dude 6 months
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phantomfish

Any suggestions of fun AU’s for Salvis or any creepypasta fics yall want to see? I really only stick to creepypasta and Sally Face lol, I’m not really in any other fandoms. I like a lot of other fandoms but I don’t really know any to make fics of haha. Do any dear readers have good suggestions? 

LyratheFISH

@phantomfish btw hiori is my absalute FAVE character from blue lock hes also my profile pic tehee(✿◕‿◕✿)(✿◕‿◕✿)(✿◕‿◕✿)(✿◕‿◕✿)
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LyratheFISH

@phantomfish omg i would love to see them and maybe draw them ONLY IF U WANT TO THO, plzz can i see em (┬┬﹏┬┬)(┬┬﹏┬┬)(┬┬﹏┬┬)(┬┬﹏┬┬)
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phantomfish

@LyratheFISH hiori?? I’m not sure what that is lol but I’ll definitely try to make an og story. I have a few OCs back from when I could draw but they lowkey might be cringy asf haha
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LyratheFISH

dude im supper sorry i forgot my passwod to thegeekest fish acount so this is my new acount im sooo sryyy (ಥ _ ಥ)(ಥ _ ಥ)(ಥ _ ಥ)

LyratheFISH

@phantomfish obvi and i cherish our fish bond heheh (✿◠‿◠)(✿◠‿◠)(✿◠‿◠)(✿◠‿◠)
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LyratheFISH

ofcc were still fishyyy frienddsss
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LyratheFISH

@phantomfish ofccc were still fishy friennds i wouldnt have it any other way my dearest ( •̀ ω •́ )✧( •̀ ω •́ )✧( •̀ ω •́ )✧( •̀ ω •́ )✧(✿◠‿◠)
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phantomfish

Sorry to anyone who was reading it but I’m taking down my ticcijack fanfic. It’s shitty and the person I was making it with had toby stutter and I am not reading through over 200k worth of words just to fix it. Besides it was amateur and best being gone lol, I will likely make another creepypasta fic after I finish the one I’m working on now

phantomfish

@D00MSD4Y yes I know but not every goddamn word 😭 I tried fixing it but it’s literally 500k words and I work waaayyy to much to go through it again
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D00MSD4Y

@phantomfish..toby canonically has a stutter and tourettes(sry if I spelled it wrong)
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phantomfish

Guys be honest, are vampire AU’s dumb? :( 

Allanisbored

@phantomfish ayyyy I'll read it as soon as possible
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phantomfish

@Allanisbored I hope I don’t mischaracterize them 😭 publishing first chapter tonight lol 
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Allanisbored

@phantomfish nothing is bad when it comes to salvis as long as it doesn't severly mischaracterize them 🥹 that honestly sounds like a really interesting fanfic and I would definitely read it
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phantomfish

Should I give Salvis a happy ending or not? Perhaps both? 

phantomfish

@D00MSD4Y I made a happy and sad ending, we both win. The angst one is a bit better imo 
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D00MSD4Y

@phantomfish PLEASE LET ME NOT CRY AT THE END I SWEAR I WILL BOMB YOU IF YOU DO
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