call me phantom, feel free to correct me or give me criticism! i'm always looking to improve
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phantomfish
Oct 25, 2026 09:20PM
If you could change one thing about my writing style, what would it be? For example, do I use the same words over and over again? Do I explain too much or too little? I feel like my writing sucks o...View all Conversations
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