@ironymaster
Hello friends and lovely humans! As exams are close approaching, I will not have any time to read/review, unfortunately... however, I may sporadically post my own writing. I plan to participate in NaNoWriMo next November - I have a plot nearly hatched :D Hopefully, by this summer, I will have time to be a more active member of Wattpad.
Thanks for the follow!!
Hey, you're back! I have to tell you that Imorah's Story really needs a lot of work and I'm going you can help me evaluate it critically and tell me what parts to chop.
I recently realised that the "inciting incident" only happens in the 4th chapter, so it needs to come much sooner and I need to chop the first part up and get rid of lots of those scenes. I'm just not sure what ones, so please help!
@shalonsims Future problem solving is like another name for 'writing science fiction' -- haha!!! The 'What If" statements that you have come up with all sound like the perfect sci-fi story premise. What if the rainforests were gone, what if everyone used the same language... all good sci-fi rests on a 'what if' statement like that. I'll check out that website. Stories don't fizzle, they percolate. They sink down back into the place where they came from and then they come out again one day in another form. Just wait, you'll see. Yes, please do put up a scenario. I'd like to read it for sure.
Hey, please don't worry, I totally understand. I barely have time to read the works of others and keep on top of my own writing.
I really value your opinion, and if and when you have time I'd love to hear what you think I could do to make Imorah's Story better.
I'd also like to read something of yours, of course. What are you writing these days?
Hey there, thanks for following and I hope you enjoy my stories!
Your bio is so confusing in a good way :p
Hello there! Love the humour on your bio page, you sound like a person after my heart. Your sci-fi "Welcome to Myopia" looks intriguing. I'll have a look when one of my current reads is concluded.
Thank you for the votes on my historical fiction, "All roads lead to scandal.." I hope Claudius' adventures in ancient Rome entertain you as he manoeuvres through life in the time before the Caesars.
@Cinilla Thank you so much! I am thoroughly enjoying your story and can't wait to read more. Welcome to Myopia has actually been discontinued for now, and will be reintroduced once I get the plot better fleshed out, but feel free to read what I have, if you really want to. have a wonderful day!
I just want to say thank you so much for all your kind support and wonderful comments! I really appreciate your enthusiasm for my story!
Thank you for the votes on my historical fiction story, "All roads lead to scandal.." My notifications and (sometimes) replies have been wonky lately, so this may be a repeat message ;). I hope you enjoy my irreverent take on Claudius Pulcher's life in ancient Rome.
@Cinilla Thank you for writing!!! Your story is helping to beat the silly assumption that historical fiction is musty and boring -- it's not, not when it's awesomely written like this one!!
I am pleased to see that you're still reading my memoir. Thanks for your vote. Comments are always appreciated. Thank you.
thnks for the follow, I followed you back! :) And I might not seem like a person to like your profile desription because of my cheerfullness, but I utterly LOVE it!! It's sooo dark and some things are soooo true!!!