Daddybettermakemecum

Hii friend 
          I need a favour
          Can you plese read my "drowning girl "and tell me if I need to do any improvement. 
          Thank you 

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Hey Caihai! Please support a friend's book. She's new to writing on wattpad and her writing is pretty good. Your support would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/270180201?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=T_Thwala&wp_originator=g00%2FSdvsT4i18oV5%2B549UvG8XJUVUOoe%2BO915EXoH8OjRleBY0ViEGkGXnRFtMpzcQICgX4ODWSUS2TH4vR1VDmcHcGK2PjrLKbwBHyDIflkaEo90osk2D%2Fb7cAIeyzR

Hey hun, hope your doing good. Mind checking out my books? I would really appreciate it. Thank you and have a great day :)

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Hi thanks for your follow❤
          
          Have a lovely day!!! And enjoy reading the book till the end lol
          
          Jackie xxx