wexdyhere

AHHH!! Should I update my fanfic??? 

wexdyhere

Happy birthday Mark! Well I have been with got7 since like girls era ya since debut! 
          At firstly bias was JB cause of dream knight but u caught my attention and my bias changed to u! 
          Well thank you for making me happy lol idk how. 
          Thank you for making igot7 happy even though you are tired! 
          Rapping perfectly 
          And well done composing back to me with Jackson! It is really nice! 
          
          Anyways, happy birthday Mark✨ 
          Happy 23 birthday❤️❤️❤️
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erinthepenguin

its okay... for me cuz idk who u writing abt (ik that its from got7 doe [ i mean, its stated up there^]) you should add like __(idk whats the word)__ but like for example the girl is her long lost sis and the long lost sis hates her cuz she stole her childhood boyfriend(FOR EXAMPLE) then they immediately patch up and became BFFs (as if its ever possible...) so like 'pull' some of the scenes to make your story longer and whilst doing that, you could even add a plot twist or smt to make ur story even longer and interesting but just dont confuse the reader can liao :) (i am trying to give suggestions so its okay if u dun follow what-so-ever) DONT delete the book at all costs, just find a random editor and ask her to edit haha jk (thats what i did btw dun follow) you can un-publish it and try to make it better [according to the p5 chinese syllabus where that old man ordered his student to fill the barrel with stuff then pour water in it.. waittt is that p5 or p6? its just basically saying that everything needs room for improvement (ya know, kinda there)]  
          
          jia you! you can do it :)
          
          -erin, ur (umm idk?) friend/senior [dayum that one makes me sound old] 
          
          p.s. you nvr told me the dates of the finals for that dam netball finals but its okay, i wasnt free on that day either
          
          p.p.s. mirabel was pissed cuz of that but its okay too(shes not pissed anymore)

erinthepenguin

kk have fun writing :D
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wexdyhere

Omg I forgot all about the thing. And awwww thanks!!!! Okay anyway u will enjoy the later part of the story! There is smth shocking gg to happen lol! Hahahah and it will be longer but first the 4 weeks I need to study for PSLE hahaha 
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erinthepenguin

well it doent matter if its bad or not (srsly its not. i have seen shitty-er ones and its really shitty) i will continue to read ur book(s) although i hv no interest in kpop
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