waxflavouredcandle

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persassyfan07

I just started to write a fanfic on percabeth would u please please read it and give me ur opinions and ideas on it:)

waxflavouredcandle

@persassyfan07 No problem, sorry for not responding sooner I wasn't on wattpad for a few days 
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waxflavouredcandle

@persassyfan07 My advice would be to try and show, not tell. For example instead of saying "I have a tiny crush on Percy but nobody knows" say something like "I saw Percy and my cheeks flushed red, I'm glad no-one saw."
            It would also be good if you could add some more dialogue. 
            I really like the concept of this fanfiction, can't wait to see where it goes. I am a sucker for percabeth lmao.
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persassyfan07

Hey, could I love ur work could u please write a fanfiction on one of these topics:
          Harmoine (Harry and Hermione)
          Percabeth
          Fierrochase
          :)
          

waxflavouredcandle

@persassyfan07 I am currently writing a klance fanfiction, It's been a slow process so I'm not really sure when I'm going to write another PJO or Harry potter fanfiction. 
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Zeinab_di_Angelo

Hi,your fanfiction was really great. 
          Last week I started to write a fanfiction about magnus chase,I will be happy if you read it and tell me your opinions. 

Zeinab_di_Angelo

Thanks you very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very much (:
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waxflavouredcandle

@Zeinab_di_Angelo no problem! English grammer can be so hard sometimes, especially for people with a first language that isn't English. Keep up the good work!! 
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Zeinab_di_Angelo

Thanks you,but about your opinion,English is not my main language but I will may more attention to my grammars.
            thank you again and have good day (:
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waxflavouredcandle

Hey guys! 
          I'm writing a klance fanfiction at the moment, but I'm not sure if I want to post it unless I'm 100% going to finish it. Should I just do it? 

clotpole_

YES DO IT 100% IM SO EXCITED 
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