vixen0100

this is my first time ever writing a book and i would love some feedback. pls be honest.

tomboylatte

@vixen0100 Thanks for the follow. Here's my honest feedback. Thought the intro was too complex to follow. Liked the beginning, where she is getting him to explain what happened. Except when it came to genital body part. Guess I'm not into very "mature" writing as some are.  Anyway, interesting start.
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The-Scrivener

We couldn't fail to notice and be greatful,Esther for the  follow. We find our selves imagining that this is because you liked our new SciFi book 'I'm a Cyborg's Pet'. If you haven't, you have missed a book which was described as  'This story is basically word cocain.' 
          
          Thanks RK & Reb  :)