unrefined

Hello there.
          I'll just cut to the chase. 
I have given up on trying to complete a story. It just has been impossible for me. I've realized I need to hone my writing skills much more and really understand the structure of storytelling. 

So, I will be posting short excerpts of my writings. If anyone could give me suggestions for story ideas on any of the excerpts, that would just rock my socks. 

Once I have a good idea for a solid storyline, I'll begin writing that book. I'll credit anyone who helped me with an idea.

Thanks,
     Erin