Larissa

Do you publish on Neobook ?

Thank you for getting the next chapter out, but I'm in the middle of a story and I will let you keep updating more chapters and I'll be back to read the whole story when you're done adding more!! Thanks again!!!

Yes this IS your story, and I'm just spewing my thoughts on what you could write about!? And I hope I just added to WHAT you want to write about! I've actually been stuck on SQ stories from the VERY biggining when they were just stories, before the show!! So I've always got ideas for their story!! 

I just finished the12th, last chapter that you posted, and of course it's leaving me wanting more!! The only kiss they've shared wasn't even a kiss, it did however bring them back into each others lives!! I seriously think areal kiss will enlighten their true feelings, and the master she can get rid of her 'fiance' (prick) Marcus! I think you should write him leaving marks, which Lana sees and moves Jen in with het.....
          

Hey, regarding my Story about Lana and Jen, I just wanted to let you all know that I merged some chapters, which is why there are now only 11. When I started writing this fanfiction, I really had no clue what I was doing, and it bothered me that some chapters didn't have many words. I'm sorry if this deleted some comments from you , but now the chapters are going to be longer. I hope I'm forgiven? 
          
          Much love to you ♥️
          PS.: The new chapter is mixed with the last one, so there is a new chapter inside chapter 11, after the part you already know :)