Hi! I actually already read your story before, but since I have a lot of stories in my library, I forgot to leave feedback—sorry about that! At first, I honestly thought it was going to be horror. You mentioned a holy school, and I read it late at night pa, so I got spooked a bit. But I love thrillers, and your story really pulled me in. I found myself asking, "Wait, what’s going to happen next?" That kind of suspense is what keeps readers hooked, and you nailed it! All I can say is, I really loved your story. Keep writing and keep growing! I’m cheering for you.
Love lots,
Ave