thewrittenbysun

I've been spending a lot of time working on Before I Said It, and I'm making some good progress!
          	
          	Today, I finished editing Chapter 7, so the prologue and first seven chapters are now revised.
          	
          	I've been focusing on tightening the timeline, strengthening character development, making conversations feel more natural, and ensuring the emotions come through without overexplaining them.
          	
          	I also added an entirely new chapter! While editing, I realized a gap in the story deserved more attention. Instead of rushing past it, I slowed things down and gave those moments the space they needed.
          	
          	One of the biggest things I'm learning through this process is that editing isn't just about fixing sentences. Sometimes it's about recognizing what's missing, what needs more development, and what doesn't need to be explained at all.
          	
          	There's still a lot of work ahead, but I'm happy with the direction the story is taking. I'm trying to make sure every chapter feels like it belongs and every character's actions and emotions make sense.
          	
          	Slowly but surely, Before I Said It is becoming the story I want it to be. ❤️

thewrittenbysun

I've been spending a lot of time working on Before I Said It, and I'm making some good progress!
          
          Today, I finished editing Chapter 7, so the prologue and first seven chapters are now revised.
          
          I've been focusing on tightening the timeline, strengthening character development, making conversations feel more natural, and ensuring the emotions come through without overexplaining them.
          
          I also added an entirely new chapter! While editing, I realized a gap in the story deserved more attention. Instead of rushing past it, I slowed things down and gave those moments the space they needed.
          
          One of the biggest things I'm learning through this process is that editing isn't just about fixing sentences. Sometimes it's about recognizing what's missing, what needs more development, and what doesn't need to be explained at all.
          
          There's still a lot of work ahead, but I'm happy with the direction the story is taking. I'm trying to make sure every chapter feels like it belongs and every character's actions and emotions make sense.
          
          Slowly but surely, Before I Said It is becoming the story I want it to be. ❤️

Derascene

Oh, my. Thank you so much for the votes. I hope you are enjoying I Twinkle For You!

Derascene

@suncloud18 Of course! The story is updated every Wednesday, 8 PM eastern time. Thank you for your support!
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thewrittenbysun

@Derascene I did enjoy this story! I'll definitely be back for the next update. Please let me know when more chapters are available!
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thewrittenbysun

HELLO!
          
          I'm officially dipping my toes back into the Wattpad writing world after being away for quite a while.
          
          My previous books are currently unpublished while they undergo edits and revisions, but I couldn't think of a better way to return than with a brand-new, fully completed story!
          
          I'm excited to be sharing something new with you and would love for you to check it out. As always, your reads, votes, and comments mean the world to me.
          
          Thank you for being here, and I hope you enjoy the journey! ❤️
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/408734487

thewrittenbysun

Hey guys!
          I ended up just disappearing again. Turns out I wasn't ready to be back. During this last while so much as changed for me. I will be trying to get new stories up but it will take time. Also check out my profile, as it's been updated. Thanks and sorry for the inconveniences.

thewrittenbysun

Hey guys!
          I know its been a while but I am back. Thanks to all who gave me some support. It will take me some time to get through all these thousands of notifications and emails. So bear with me as it will be a slow start but ill be writing constantly for you guys once again in hopefully near by time.
          
          XOXO 
          ~Sun <3
          
          P.s Thank you to my 1.7k followers who have stuck with me. You guys are amazing.

blxckfatale

Hello! Just wanted to say I love your books (Kendra Ellis, I'm still here etc.) 
          
          I just want to ask if you can check out my two books, The Rebellion and Hollywood's New Bad Girl! Trust me, they're better than you think. (Sooo not saying that just because they're my books!)
          
          -Lotsalove Wynter <3