Brad Jones

Ach accidently published a draft but has been removed 

I've been re-reading my work recently and something feels off - but I can't put my finger on it. If somebody could point something they don't like in my writing style that'd be cool, I really want to make Rising into something fairly readable (which will start by Americanising the Cullens who sound far too British)

Chapter 3 of Rising is up! Let me know what you think :D

Chapter 2 is now up on Rising! Go check it out guys and let me know what you think :D

Two-thirds of the way through the new chapter of rising - I can't believe it's taken me nearly two months to do that. Should return to a bi-weekly update schedule after that! Thanks for the follows and the likes :D

Will start updating the Hufflepuff chronicles again at Christmas break - GCSEs don't allow much leisure time but I'll be free to write then!