sunlily_09

Fun (and not-so-fun) fact:
          	
          	Another reason I couldn't give Clara and Charles a completely happy ending - and honestly, there wasn't enough character-building to just suddenly marry them - is that I'm a sucker for tragic stories. I love exploring heartbreak, loss, and the quiet ache of what could have been.
          	
          	Originally, Charles wasn't going to make it back to Clara at all. In my head, the letters would stop arriving, the war would end, and he'd become one of the countless men who gave everything for their country, swallowed by the chaos of battle, finally finding peace in eternal sleep ,gone but never forgotten.
          	
          	It would have been bittersweet: Clara, left behind, writing his obituary to honor his sacrifice, finally having the chance to tell him the words she never could. His letters would remain tucked away memories frozen in time, ending scene with Clara having moved on but still staring at his photograph in one of her framed newspaper article , where he would still look as handsome as the day she lost him.
          	
          	This version would have shown his final moments, his death, and her heartbreak - but also her eventual healing. Right people, wrong century.
          	
          	I didn't go that route, though, because everyone who saw the now deleted drafts said it was way too sad and depressing .
          	 They wanted wedding bells, love, and all that jazz. In the end, after a lot of back-and-forth, I settled on... not a completely happy ending, but not fully tragic either. I left the rest to the imagination, somewhere between sorrow and hope.
          	

sunlily_09

Fun (and not-so-fun) fact:
          
          Another reason I couldn't give Clara and Charles a completely happy ending - and honestly, there wasn't enough character-building to just suddenly marry them - is that I'm a sucker for tragic stories. I love exploring heartbreak, loss, and the quiet ache of what could have been.
          
          Originally, Charles wasn't going to make it back to Clara at all. In my head, the letters would stop arriving, the war would end, and he'd become one of the countless men who gave everything for their country, swallowed by the chaos of battle, finally finding peace in eternal sleep ,gone but never forgotten.
          
          It would have been bittersweet: Clara, left behind, writing his obituary to honor his sacrifice, finally having the chance to tell him the words she never could. His letters would remain tucked away memories frozen in time, ending scene with Clara having moved on but still staring at his photograph in one of her framed newspaper article , where he would still look as handsome as the day she lost him.
          
          This version would have shown his final moments, his death, and her heartbreak - but also her eventual healing. Right people, wrong century.
          
          I didn't go that route, though, because everyone who saw the now deleted drafts said it was way too sad and depressing .
           They wanted wedding bells, love, and all that jazz. In the end, after a lot of back-and-forth, I settled on... not a completely happy ending, but not fully tragic either. I left the rest to the imagination, somewhere between sorrow and hope.
          

sunlily_09

Hi @oceanedges , 
          thanks so much for asking! This is  the original version I wrote, and since it's my first time trying romance I felt a little shy (and honestly a bit lost). After a lot of thought, I decided to give it more of an open ending - letting the characters sort of fade out naturally instead of the whole 'marriage, kids, happily-ever-after' route. That felt a bit too typical, and I liked the idea of readers imagining their own version of what happens next.
          
          That said, I'm definitely open to continuing their story if people want more or if anyone has any suggestions .
          
          I’m also looking for tips on how to share this story around, if you have any ideas I'd love to hear them!

oceanedges

Pls update 

sunlily_09

@oceanedges  you’re welcome , I’m happy somebody likes my story ,have a great summer ☺️
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oceanedges

@oceanedges thank u for the update 
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sunlily_09

omg hii I swear I didn't disappear off the face of the earth or anything I was just... doing absolutely nothing productive except living my best writer's block arc
            
            promise I have been working on Chapter 4 and it's coming soon maybe even tomorrow (probably, maybe, yes.)
            
            ty for being invested, that's literally so sweet ☺️
            
            have a lovely life, stranger
            
            byeeee <3
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