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@sour_sap randomly thought of your Kyle OC last name being Prawn lol

@diesel_WorkZ_2 Lance: *humming* Don't nobody bring me bad news~
            
            CEO: Uh, sir, Lex Luthor is on the phone.
            
            Lance: *picks it up* Hello?
            
            Lex: Get out of my chair!
            
            Lance:....*hangs up* You can verbalize and vocalize, but just bring me the clues!

@sour_sap Lance: (pout)

@diesel_WorkZ_2 Truck Driver: Which one of you fellas ordered two dozen aluminum rails?
            
            Lance: That would be me! Zee, I'm sure you recall my long-kept dream of building a guard tower next to the balcony?
            
            Zee: Lance, the zoning board and the plaintiff have turned you down many times. The last refusal was "with extreme prejudice."
            
            Lance: True, but for a structure under forty feet, variants are needed. Soon, you'll be under the protection under my 39 foot guard tower!
            
            Lance has the guard tower built, a clear noticeable feature on the penthouse...and blocking the view of the sun to Zee's room.
            
            Zee: *on the phone* Yes, he claims it's legal, but there has to be something wrong with it. [Lance: Ha ha ha haha!] Because he's doing it to annoy me!
            -
            Lance: *sees Zee and Babs* Intruder alert, danger! This thing is paying for itself already.
            
            Zee: Lance, I brought someone with an accounting building experience to show proof in condemning your eyesore.
            
            Lance: *slides down his chair* Inspect away, you can't touch me! This tower's only 99 feet square, non residential, and it doesn't even have a foundation.
            
            Babs: Hold on, with a face that long and without a foundation. Forget law expertise, are you a complete moron?
            
            Lance: A moron? I fail to take your meaning, BaBs. *leans on the guard tower*
            
            The tower feels down, destroying it and leaving Lance upset.

@sour_sap maybe a smiling friends story? Lol 

@sour_sap Thanks. Hope you can do it. It'll be grateful of you and no doubt, It'll be fun.

@Supreme1137 I do like the idea. The Dark side warrior ancestors, very cool concept. I do think there are too many girls in the harem. While I'm not into doing commissions, I do like your idea.

@sour_sap here's some ideas. 
            
            1. Eric spent the entire week at home with his cats as he doesn't feel like hanging out with anyone given his mood. One day, he left to get food and comes back to find his cats missing, his powers flared and he goes on a moody rampage for his cat's whereabouts.
            
            2. Tatsu teaches Eric the art of meditation to help him find inner peace. He then reluctantly tries it and finds himself in an astral plane as Eric is truly at peace. But one small problem... while Eric is within the astral plane in his inner world, Eric's body outside is in a frozen meditated state, much to Tatsu's failed attempts to snap him out of it. The Superhero Girls, Supervillain and the Invinci-bros get wind of it and try to bring Eric back or they fear he'll be in a meditated state coma, trapped in his inner world for good.
            
            3. Lex Luthor tries to recruit Eric into the Legion of Doom but is repeated turned down by the Ultraviolet lantern at every peaceful or forceful proposal. So Lex managed to get a DNA sample from Eric and create a female clone of him while scanning & replicating an Ultraviolet lantern ring so the clone would work for him but the female clone "Erica", doesn't want to work for lex or isn't in the mood, causing lex to lose cool & throw a tantrum. 
            
            Whatta ya think? More ideas are coming soon. 

@sour_sap Neat. I'm doing okay too. 
            
            1. Oh okay, I understand. You don't have to use the last name Karnage. Perhaps, Moonstar? And thanks for the compliment on the villain name. 
            
            2. Okay. Some seriousness and comedy ideas coming up for Eric. 
            
            3. Cool. Shroud Sparrow or Just Shroud are nice choices, it's up to you which one you'll pick. 
            
            4. Oh okay, I understand. Perhaps you could alter and change Doomsday Knight's origin however you wish. The parents as forever knights would make great sense. And the injury selection you mentioned can work too. 
            
            5. Hmmmm, I see, the more sinister plan afoot. That could work. 
            
            And thank you. 

@NexusCrow-X Hi there, I'm doing alright how about you?
            
            Anyway, yes, I have looked through your suggestions.
            
            For the OC magician name, I do like his first name being Kyle, but I'm not too sure on his last name being Karnage. The story won't have that emotional depth in it too. As for his villain name, I do admit, it is pretty good. 
            
            For the Ultraviolet Lantern story, the story will be a mix of seriousness but comedy. Eric's not really "in the mood" to be a hero due to how moody he is but gets forced into it anyway.
            
            Now, for the batman protege name, I do like the hero name Shroud Sparrow, or just Shroud.
            
            Now, for the two villains of my Ben 10 story. I do like the Doomsday Knight backstory. I'm not too sure about him hating all humanity. As for him hating his parents, I was thinking instead of his parents hating him and being plumbers, maybe they will be forever knights instead? As for his disfigured face, I was thinking more of an injury that would leave him with surgical scars.
            
            As for the Empress, OC, not bad, I like the concept, but the whole freeing humans and aliens thing could maybe be sort of like a fake plan she has, and instead something much more sinister?
            
            Either way, I do like your suggestions.

@sour_sap You're welcome.

@NexusCrow-X thanks, happy 4th to you too

@sour_sap Cool.

@MCreator09 thanks. I've also made some changes with my DCSHG OCs to finalize them. Anyway, thanks again

It's cool. I can see you're working on some new stories, can't wait to read them.

@sour_sap You're welcome. 

@NexusCrow-X thanks

@sour_sap Alright. Hope you do well on your new account.