Geneva Hillsdale

Heyy!  
            Yes I did see the comment...It was about Jasper’s POV suddenly in the first chapter; sorry I must have mentally answered and forgotten to (super sorry about that!) but it was intentional aha.
            The book isn’t supposed to be driven by just one or two povs but a collection aha, 
            I hope as long as it isn’t confusing the story carries through :)
            
            Unfortunately I am not the best person to ask, I have a very distinct way of writing and from a first chapter it’s practically impossible to tell; what I would say is the best way to grow is if you join book clubs and reader exchanges on the site so you can share this journey together.
            In my opinion every story has potential and I would want to be fully supportive and read the book which I just don’t have the time for. What I would say is that if you are confident in your story and idea, others will feel that too. You’re going to be great!

@Aamenah456 
            
            Hi, Aamenah.
            
            I am reading Charlie and Dia.
            I like your characters and story ideas.
            I was just looking for whether you responded to my comment about `look up head hopping` to see if you responded. I can't find my comment. Oh well.
            
            I am also writing out a first story on here.
            Let me know if you think my story has potential.
            I have only written one chapter on paper.
            I have a second and third chapter in mind, but need to write it out.