soha_writess

I will be updating VOTH tonight <3

i_shnvi

@soha_writess i lob zu diduuuuuuuuuuuu
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Kajxltelzz

Hey Author apologies for promoting my story here
          Can love conquer the shame of their past and the danger of the present? The brothers might have started their marriages out of obligation, but they will end up fighting for the women they never expected to adore.
          
          Ranvijay, Advait, and Dhruv are three powerful brothers. They love each other fiercely, but their marriages are cold and forced. Ranvijay is engaged to Mahika through an old family promise. Advait married the pregnant Aaradhya just to protect her name. And Dhruv despises Noor, the woman he rescued and married out of duty.
          
          Their lives are thrown into chaos when they move to the royal mansion for Ranvijay's coronation. On the day he is to become king, the body of their long-dead father is found.
          
          Suddenly, the brothers and their wives are trapped together in a murder mystery. They must now rely on each other to survive the scandal. As the search for the killer begins, the cold walls around their hearts crack. Fear brings them close, and protection turns into passion.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/403211351-palace-secrets

Arivivivi

Hello author, 
          Sorry for posting on your personal space but I hope you take a look at my story, I will really appreciate it.
          Welcome to a world where ancient legends slip quietly into modern India and six seemingly ordinary teenagers are anything but ordinary. This story follows their lives as they stumble into the truth of who they really are and the powers they were never prepared to hold. There is chaos, friendship, destiny and a lot of heart as these demigod teens try to balance school, family, road trips and the weight of entire worlds resting on their shoulders. If you enjoy mythology woven into everyday life, characters who feel real, and adventures that grow wilder with every chapter, you are in the right place. Dive in and meet them. Their story is just beginning.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/362453494-samyukta-a-tale-of-6-warriors

Maple111

Hi author! I hope you are doing good. I wanted to let you know that I loved your book 'A home with you'. But at the same time I would like to give some constructive criticism and pls don't take it in a negative sense. I just felt that your book is so good that if ties all those lose strings it would be perfect. 
          What I loved about your book - 
          
          ● Your characters are humane. You have shown their flaws, their emotions, their messy bits, their strengths and most importantly their character development.  I have read hundreds of books on Wattpad but yours is one of those few in which the characters know how to communicate well, like adults. Not only you have shown how they struggle with their emotions but at the same time how they are willing to resolve them. You haven't put them on a pedestal. You have kept things quite realistic. 
          ● What was especially admirable about ML which we rarely see in books was that he noticed things and he never invalidated Ishanika's instincts, fears, doubts and feelings. He always read the change in her energy. He was always ready to call out whoever was at fault. 
          ● At the same time what was really admirable about FL was that she was not afraid from speaking her mind. She was quite secure in herself as how women should be. 
          
          Following points left questions in my mind which I think could be improved - 
          
          ● You haven't shown properly how Reeti was manipulated by Aditya and how was their relationship which could have given a little more clarity on how she came to cheat on her husband.
          ● You haven't shown how Aditya tried to spook Ishanika when she found that diary in Reeti's room. How he tried to scare her out in that room and also afterwards by banging the door. 
          ● What did Siddharth did with him at the end. Her sister should have been informed something about Aditya because she will have questions in the future about her brother ryt.
          ● What happened with Reeti's phone ? What was there in Ansh's crib ? Was that fire really an accident ?

lifey_echoes

Also about the sister she is very skeptical... I mean I feel like that the sister and Aditya they new something about riti like I think that riti cheating on her husband had something to do with the sister as well I believe that sister had an idea or maybe completely fully aware about riti and Aditya affair and also reeti's suicide.... Remember that phone call about Ansh's crib the sister' behaviour was very unsettling 
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lifey_echoes

@Maple111 damn I thought I was the only one with these many questions... Honestly I was very frustrated by the end of the story because the build up of the story was amazing and crazy but so many questions so many confusions were unanswered by the author... I agree with you seriously....
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