skyebmewrites

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA DONE

skyebmewrites

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA DONE

ThePerfectChild13

Hi! Excited to be paired up with you this week. I love critiques that help me improve, so feel free to let the red ink flow :) I do have one overarching question on whether my ONC book should start with the first chapter or the second chapter. Football is not a central part of the story so I wonder if it sends the wrong impression. It is however the catalyst for Bucky to join a club. Be interested in which chapter you think is stronger. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/389980852-the-blackfire-apprentice-bxb-onc-2025

skyebmewrites

Hello hello hello!
          I've decided to branch out from Wattpad a bit, only took a decade but here we go. You can now find me on Lutionary and Ream under skyebmewrites where the rewritten version of Cape Crossed it going up two chapters a week. From now on those are the only places second drafts will be going. This has been a great place for that initial introduction and workshopping but I'm looking to push boundaries and improve beyond that. So there's that.

skyebmewrites

Actually I decided if they’re going to be free on other sites the second draft will go up here too, because I can’t make up my mind apparently 
Reply