@skyblueroses14
Yes! The dynamic is great, but a few details won't hurt the plot. These "forced scenes" mentioned could be tinkered with when re-written. It would be great if you rewrite the book! A few changes wouldn't hurt!
@juststar19 honestly the book is great the way it is and if you wants to rewrite it u can but please don't change the book. I loved every single moment with THE NERD
Yes author please change of remove the forced scene from the book "That Nerd". The storyline is good but you need to improvise or rewrite it in the future.
@skyblueroses14
Yes! The dynamic is great, but a few details won't hurt the plot. These "forced scenes" mentioned could be tinkered with when re-written. It would be great if you rewrite the book! A few changes wouldn't hurt!
@juststar19 honestly the book is great the way it is and if you wants to rewrite it u can but please don't change the book. I loved every single moment with THE NERD
Yes author please change of remove the forced scene from the book "That Nerd". The storyline is good but you need to improvise or rewrite it in the future.