@skybluebellsringing
Hey, I read you're story "You, You, You" and it is the best story I've ever read on Wattpad! You actually inspired me to try to write my own story. I've never written anything on here before so any advice that you can give would help a lot! Hope to keep in touch!❤️❤️❤️The Loudest Love to you❤️❤️❤️
Hi! I just finished your story 'No, You Gotta' and I wanted to tell you that I was blown away by it – never read a story so good on Wattpad!
I love how you described the interactions between the characters and their desire, how you attributed each character their own role and personality...
I didn't post my review on the story because I saw that a girl had already said everything that was needed. I will just add that I LOVE angst when it is well written : I'm particularly thinking of the first time Jeff and Nora make love just after Andy's death, the one where Eddie teaches Nora to surf (this scene is so peaceful yet full of guilty desire – a pleasure to read) and the scene where Eddie and Nora are – quite literally – fighting to not commit something that they know they are too weak to resist to and is bound to happen.
Each character has their time to shine, and I really liked their evolution for the beginning to the end.
What I also liked is that never once you made Nora feel ashamed for desiring one of the men. On a sentimental point of view, maybe, but that's what angst is. On a physical point of view though, never. So thanks, because it's rare! The scenes after the smutty scenes are probably my favorite because they feel so intimate and Nora never seem to feel lost right after she has been with one of the boys – she told Jeff she wanted HIM, her complicity with Stone is obvious, and she seems so relaxed after having been with Eddie, not scared to admit (to the reader, not to Eddie, that would have been just weird XD) that he's a very good lover and maybe made her feel more than the others on a physical point of view.
You use great metaphors and vocabulary, which is good for me – I'm a French student studying English Civilization and Literature!
I loved your story so much that I followed you right after finishing and I just saw that you had another completed story! Well, I'm just eager now!
Thanks for the nice read!