iyelylies

Sorry to disturb you! And also, sorry for plugging!!
          
          I just wanna ask you if...
          
          Are you a fan of Historical Fantasy and Mystery? If yes is your answer.. Then I would like to recommend you my very first ongoing story!
          
          Entitled :
          
          The Cursed Princess : A Princess Without A Soul
          
          Link : https://www.wattpad.com/story/241285969?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ArishanatiaCalliaria&wp_originator=Qe%2F%2BQG9bjl4%2BgcMxA9ZdzblphQe2vsCIGttciShAPiYCRU11L4UnurV%2B38%2BkjPXPYuITXkW%2BXZTIO%2Blr21TFrfnaAoeAyQvNI3uxGNXKg7gBCGYMyQ7BAFIIqgy%2BWsGt
          
          Vote and Comments are highly appreciated! Thanks in advance!!

_ENYS_

So I changed the time skip to 10 years so Ayana is 14 and Xue Mo 17. The general is 19. I also deleted the kissing parts. Thanks for noticing the problem and I hope my solution is enough. I tried to change all the ages throughout the chapters but I may have missed some so don't hesitate to comment again if anything is incoherent.
          
          Thanks for reading Bloody Demon and thanks again for commenting about their ages!

Ahuzaki

Thx for the follow! Hope u continue to enjoy!

Ahuzaki

I'm glad to hear that since it's my first story and i just post it without proofreading~at least that means my mistakes weren't too much~^^
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Ahuzaki

Domo~thx^^
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shellington99

@Ahuzaki  your a pretty great writer. I've really enjoyed reading your story.
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