@LeiahRoo_Writing Hi! The story has a lot of potential, it just wasn't what I was looking to read at that moment. The POV of it being someone reminiscing about prior events kept throwing me off, leaving no guess work to some items. The recap at the beginning of each chapter would be OK if someone was reading as you were writing, but for a complete story and for someone who just wants to cruise thru the story, it was very repetitious. Once the incident with the sister happened, I decided that it was time to move on. Sorry, I hope you take these comments in the positive way that they are meant. Good luck with the rewrite!