scorpionzero25

Do people prefer to read stories with dialogue that’s woven into the paragraph like this: 
          	
          	John sat down the coffee cup and sighed, “I don’t like how this is going.” Carl sat next to him and stayed silent for a moment, “Me neither man.” 
          	
          	Or like this: 
          	
          	John sat down and sighed.
          	
          	John: I don’t like how this is going
          	
          	Carl sat next to him  and was silent for a moment.
          	
          	Carl: Me neither man.
          	
          	Personally I think the top one is better but what do you all think?

scorpionzero25

Do people prefer to read stories with dialogue that’s woven into the paragraph like this: 
          
          John sat down the coffee cup and sighed, “I don’t like how this is going.” Carl sat next to him and stayed silent for a moment, “Me neither man.” 
          
          Or like this: 
          
          John sat down and sighed.
          
          John: I don’t like how this is going
          
          Carl sat next to him  and was silent for a moment.
          
          Carl: Me neither man.
          
          Personally I think the top one is better but what do you all think?

scorpionzero25

To anybody that sees this and plays games made by Activision or Blizzard please read this story. It genuinely makes me sick to know that I’ve given these companies money.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/278621341?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=CorpusKiller05&wp_originator=J5n%2BRadYL5SU44Zp18xZKUN5FVKna5LMHuO0l4JMYgHowtxsi6eho8dbjsig2erJwEE82rweWvWTer1SPBRdZqECHeu82OFmO7sYGNwc2ylRkPq%2BxKsPYRbkjAJAymxw

scorpionzero25

I don’t know if anybody actually read these but if anybody does can you suggest some good books because I have run out

Potato_Girl_Sasha

@CorpusKiller05
            Hello, I have stumbled upon your profile
            
            I don't know half of the books in there but, you can go have a look at my reading lists if you want
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