I made it through chapter 6. lots of bits where the author writtenesees through details that are unnecessary to the plotline. the germ is infectious and the details that are unimportant cloud the important ones so much so that it's annoying. it is a first draft and while i didn't make mention of these things in common form i did point out two jarring typos which were met with defensive rude comments of editting, whiile other people make mention of being confused and such (that's ok)... whatever not reading any more from this writer.
