cosmonism

im so so sorry to bother you, but i was wondering if you could please check out my book "rogue - english version"... i translated it - it was originally in my first language, portuguese - and really wanted a bit of feedback as to how i can improve my writing! if you don't wanna give feedback, that's fine too! it would mean the world to me if you could read it :) here's a description:
          Free yourself from your roots.
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          Kappa was never one to follow the rules but, out of fear, he always did. His footsteps guided him along the usual, routined path, but his eyes searched for any source of adrenaline. The war dragged on before his eyes, time like sand. Even so, Kappa was not like those terrorist rebels who frightened innocent villages. After all, staying on the fence was his specialty.
          But when an enigmatic letter arrives in his mail, everything is about to change.
          here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/241433696-rogue-english-version-%E2%9C%94 
          i hope you like it!

remotewealth

Yes sweetheart I’d definitely check it out!
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