ramorelock

@ramorelock I am actually quite serious on writing my stories as it has been eligible. I stay in Malaysia but Malay is not my own language. I am a Chinese who learns English since young. 
            
            The Hitman series is new. That's my second fanfiction. I just started not long ago and I really do think I need help on it. 
            
            I am willing to hear some opinions from you. I feel that my story is lacking of flavour and spice, I guess? I am not very sure but I have that gut feeling in the pit of my stomach. I really do have a strong passion in writing but... I am just not sure if I can succeed or be proud of myself. 
            
            When I saw your message, I am willing to take any criticism from you as it helps my story. No problem even if I need to rewrite. If it helps boost the story, I will take it as a chance.

@NicoleStansJin I was reading some of your stuff. My question would be how serious are you? 
            
            If you want to do it, and you're willing to work for it - you could improve your writing, self-publish some day OR work to find an agent. 
            
            I'm curious why you wouldn't want to write in your own language - there are enough hurdles in writing ... why start with a handicap. BUT you can certainly do it. Your English is good enough.
            
            Is your Hitman series your most recent? I could give you a few pointers. But you'd have to be willing to do rewrites. 
            
            Of course, if you just want someone to cheer you on - I can just do that. I"m happy to do either. I scare off a lot of people when I critique so you'd have to have a thick skin. 
            
            Something I can tell you up front is - make a good choice in where to start your story AND if something doesn't move your plot along - get rid of it. Be ruthless.  I'd take whatever you've just written... try to apply these two ideas with your writing  and see if it helps tighten up your story a bit. 
            
            Good luck. I'm rooting for you.
            
            April

@ramorelock well... I stay in Asian countries. I am not sure about Amazon but my mum is trying to do aomething about it. 
            
            I am just a really young author and I don't know the basics to survive in the writing world. I had a passion for writing after I 'suddenly' scored 90+ for my compositions in the school exams. I am really a newbie so I have no idea at all. 
            
            Perhaps you can help me?

aweeee thanks !! 

Thank you so much!!