Totally understand! My first chapter was hard to write because I know where I'm taking the story and just want to try and establish everything quickly so I can get into the main action! But that's good to know, I may try and rework the opening to make it more snappy :) you've literally given me the biggest smile though :D and everyone needs a bit of cheesy though sometimes! Definitely if you do take it down though write something else, you've good a good writing style!