raindrop556

Please give my story "Rather Fun" a chance. ;) 

VictoriaFrances

Hey, do you mind checking out my story if you have the time? :) I really like your work! xo

raindrop556

Yah, I entirely understand that, like you just want to get to the good parts xD And thank you maybe I'll try writing something new :)
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VictoriaFrances

Totally understand! My first chapter was hard to write because I know where I'm taking the story and just want to try and establish everything quickly so I can get into the main action! But that's good to know, I may try and rework the opening to make it more snappy :) you've literally given me the biggest smile though :D and everyone needs a bit of cheesy though sometimes! Definitely if you do take it down though write something else, you've good a good writing style!
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raindrop556

Oh, and yah I'm going to take it down just because I probably won't ever update it and it's soo cheesy
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