rainbow_love11

@Mileydi201085 Not at all, haha. I made it up on my own.

FATalpublications

I just recently posted two chapters of an old story I have written. If you get the chance please stop by and take a look. (: And, if it isn't too much to ask, leave a comment with some sort of feedback; it helps me better my writing. Thanks so much. If you ever want me to read anything you post, feel free to ask (:

Beautifuldisastrous

Hello ... I was wondering of you could read one my stories and critize them, sorry it's annoying, only have two for now there is.... 
          
          My life Upside Down! 
          
          "What would you do if suddenly tragedy fell upon your shoulders and you were suddenly sent lo live with a total stranger, who was rich? Alex lived that; when her mother died she was sent to live with a stranger named With a rich popular director and writer. In a new school with new friends, Alex tries to find out the truth about her mother’s past and her true identity. Experience all the romance, adventures and funny moments of Alex’s life in her new home and life." 
          
          and... 
          
          Lost World 
          
          "Michelle is your normal average sophomore, living the life, happy, with no worries, when suddenly the government and a group of mercenaries go after her, trying to kill her. Making her meet W.I.S.E, another group of mercenaries who are looking for a lost island that is said to hold the future of society, they say Michelle has the coordenances to the island but she's only left with an old dusty book. Will she help find the island, get killed or start World War III? Embark on Michelle's new journey filled with adventure, romance, betrayal and breath taking revelations"
          
          thanks :)

Dark-Beauty

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my first attempt on a Greek story. I decided to write about something new on wattpad instead of another vampire story even though we all love them (although it does include them but in a totally different context) I would love some feedback, criticisms welcome 
          
          It’s called: The Immoral Darkness
          
          Cassie has watched the entrapment of her mother before her eyes from the very people she lives with…Greek Gods. Since that night, a lot has changed; she finds out that she is the reincarnated Greek goddess Aphrodite who is now on the run from the most powerful being…. Zeus. Aphrodite is the Greek god of love and a romance unfolds whilst her run from Zeus. She discovers many powers that endanger her at some points but she is Aphrodite, she somehow comes out of it unscathed. She is trying to go against the written prophecy, but will she leave the hands of her beloved citizens of an entirely different kingdom all to the rising darkness?