purplelover0722

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KRYSTAL2442

Hi darling, it's got a great story line and has lots of potential...but I hope you don't mind me givnig you some positive criticism i think you need to slow down and add some more detail it all happened very fast Xxx

purplelover0722

yeah i wrote this in the sixth grade so not much of a writer back then
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